Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, November 5, 2009

Still Breathing Comments

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“I am still breathing” complained friend
“Everybody breathe till the end “I answered
“It is not as simple as you think”
“I am loosing grip and sinking” friend wept
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Lady Grace 05 November 2009

in first stanza, ..it is a dialogue...so, i will comment like this..the author is expressing nice advices to some who suffers skip beating, who suffers hyper vent or to people who lacks rest...so in addition to his advice, i will make my own version under the supervision of ''me''lolz.... 1..never take problem as deadly 2.trust GOD and pray 3.never be stressed 4.have a little time for urself 5.follow doctor's advice 6.do what u think it is good for you, for that is one way of healing urself...lavs ya dear.....

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Yacov Mitchenko 05 November 2009

It may be that love upsets the normal course of our breathing, but love is the only real life there is. Sometimes those who breathe normally and evenly do so because they are not really alive; their vision is limited. Better love with all its agonies than a physically healthy, boring, and unfulfilled life. I think that is what you're saying here. Thanks. If time allows, please read 'October Panther' and 'Hospital Walls'.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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