All brittle twigs
No flesh
Covering up
The abrasions
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Often people think that dry-looking trees are no longer alive, but even though their skin is dead, they are still alive in all sorrow, more attention is needed for the well-being of our earth, a very sad song captured so beautifully. TOP score and much much more. I have enjoyed it tremendously.
A beautiful poem with a meaningful message. So rightly said and brilliantly crafted. To my favorites..
This brilliant poem is ranked #86 in the list of Best Members Poems on PoemHunter. Congratulations, Nosheen. Well done.
TODAY number 23 dear Unnikrishnan, Congratulations dear Nosheen!
TODAY this poem is on number 23 of The Best Member Poems, CONGRATULATIONS, dear Nosheen. Today is the 22 January 2023.
Beneath the dead skin.....brilliant.....thanks for sharing...
What a marvel! Most poetically conceived. Exquisitely Nosheenic. Sighting positivity in the worst situations. Metaphorical poem. Loved it. Top score.
There's life still beneath the dead skin.....I can't believe so though I liked this poem of hope for the future. A great poem.
Excellent poem Nosheen. With climate change go check your winter trees, they, like ours, may have early spring buds on them.
I love the lessons of the changing seasons and of this poem! TFS
A most deep and touching call for life, expressed in a most beautiful and touching way. A poem to remember, admirable in every way. Just precious! Triple A.
Very beautiful, thank you so much for your efforts