Friday, January 13, 2023

Still Alive Comments

Rating: 5.0

All brittle twigs
No flesh
Covering up
The abrasions
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Nosheen Irfan
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Howard Mcdougal 21 January 2023

Very beautiful, thank you so much for your efforts

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 January 2023

Often people think that dry-looking trees are no longer alive, but even though their skin is dead, they are still alive in all sorrow, more attention is needed for the well-being of our earth, a very sad song captured so beautifully. TOP score and much much more. I have enjoyed it tremendously.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 January 2023

A beautiful poem with a meaningful message. So rightly said and brilliantly crafted. To my favorites..

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This brilliant poem is ranked #86 in the list of Best Members Poems on PoemHunter. Congratulations, Nosheen. Well done.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 January 2023

TODAY number 23 dear Unnikrishnan, Congratulations dear Nosheen!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 January 2023

TODAY this poem is on number 23 of The Best Member Poems, CONGRATULATIONS, dear Nosheen. Today is the 22 January 2023.

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Anjandev Roy 14 January 2023

Beneath the dead skin.....brilliant.....thanks for sharing...

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Jayne Louise Davies 14 January 2023

Brilliant write Nosheen x Loved it!

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What a marvel! Most poetically conceived. Exquisitely Nosheenic. Sighting positivity in the worst situations. Metaphorical poem. Loved it. Top score.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 January 2023

There's life still beneath the dead skin.....I can't believe so though I liked this poem of hope for the future. A great poem.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 13 January 2023

Truly amazing with the last line Bravo!

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David Wood 13 January 2023

Excellent poem Nosheen. With climate change go check your winter trees, they, like ours, may have early spring buds on them.

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Rob Lamberton 13 January 2023

I love the lessons of the changing seasons and of this poem! TFS

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Sandra Feldman 13 January 2023

A most deep and touching call for life, expressed in a most beautiful and touching way. A poem to remember, admirable in every way. Just precious! Triple A.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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