Charles Chaim Wax

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Tuesday, November 15, 2005

Still Alive Comments

Rating: ★4.8

Twilight in Coney Island
blue descending into deeper blue
at last obscurity
indicating
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Charles Chaim Wax

island Obscurity depression

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Declan McHenry 15 November 2005

Your work has a superb narrative style Charles. Every aspect of it is so real.

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Jon Lloyd 15 November 2005

Nice one, Charles! The everyday meets the sinister - has a very 'film-like' quality (you may like to substitute 'movie-like' for your side of the pond!) Get working on that screen-play! !

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