Twist your lips.. twitch your eye-brows,
still you are a beauty!
change your mind.. and be as adamant, .
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Excellent.. Nicely penned poem here, thanks for lovely sharing.. :)
A fun read and brilliant poem. I enjoyed your work. Thanks for sharing
good poem about how no matter what somebody does, she yet remains a beauty! Great!
Nice work dear poet..no matter what she does she still a beauty
Think this depicts exactly how men are smitten by women! Also how privileged some women are to be loved in such a way. A nice write, please proof read for grammar.
Such a splendid write, Siddartha.....................
Never quite a beauty represented in disagreement! Wonderful show of faith, portrayed in a range of flawless stunt of words! Thanks for sharing, Montik
Beauty lies in lovers eyes? Oh, no, real beauty is seen by the lover only! Thank you for such a warm, heartfelt poem.
I read it and I walk in the beauty of feeling her thin and fragile scenes. Dr. Riza
This is a remarkable poem about love and beauty. Beauty is sometimes subline. Loving relationships have values that can push through the every day occurances in life. A wonderful write! .
A good read. Beauty has enslaved many, but is what makes the world go round.
A sense of beauty in the real sense overpowered me as i was reading your poem.. such attitude is praiseworthy. a girl who gets such a man is very lucky. tony
The poem is a SURE BEAUTY