Friday, July 13, 2007

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i go there still
if not to dream of you (and the time before)
then to pretend that i am
to see daylight glint off
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ryan blood
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Joseph Daly 14 July 2007

Ryan, this is a lovely poem that is well constructed and hits an aspect of us that all poets should hit. there has been a lot of junk posted on this site, normally it is posted en masse. That you have done this may mean that you end up being ignorede. I think that would be a great shame as you display a great talent as well as an ability to usxe the language.

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