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Like the balanced form, would have liked though the content to be more specific...a good poem.

Such despair..to the poet -.you are not lost as long as you are writing. Your poem reflects an inate lyricism and sensitivity to cadence.

Mark, the way you painted loneliness is touching. Great poem. I have also written a poem on the theme of loneliness, 'My Day', you may want to have a look at some point.

Very nice poem. From the depths of dark cold world we learn to rise. Enjoyed reading it.

Good honest message Mark. Good write.

There is always highs and lows in life but we keep moving on. Thoughts are always best shared, I enjoyed reading your poem

There is always highs and lows in life but we keep moving on. Thoughts are always best shared, I enjoyed reading your poem

Sometimes, we experience the highest highs. And at other times, we experience the lowest lows. But one thing we should always remember is: As long as there's life, there is hope. Thank you for sharing this soul-searching poem.

Life is so frustrating sometimes

Great write, I think many of us can identify with this.

no words for thy words! ! !

I love this poem very much. Rhyme and tone is amazing! Well-written 'piece' Mark!

some days are dark days; but the poet is blessed through the light of poetry

Sometimes, our frustration enhances our pessimism. Again, we recover ourselves, from this state of mind.Great write! Loved, the tune very much.