Stiletto Comments

I thought only of You. Romantic brilliance, indeed! Thanks Mark for this lovely poem.5 stars

I see the height of the stiletto. And I desire the magnitude of life and love! Another excellent write, M.J.

i was thinking of what to say about the shape of the poem; Simone saved me time. tall slender bronze? ? ? a woman? does the topic concrete refer to dried cement? is the TSB a bronze statue on a concrete pedestal? a TALKING, SHOE-WIELDING OR SHOE-WEARING woman? ? ? CUTE. bri ;)

A wonderful example of a struggle to keep focused on the conversation when ones thoughts are pressing on other matters. Love the shoe shape of the poem too.10

distraction is at the foot of this poem, in the shape of a bronze figure

I love how you shaped your poem! ! ! ! ! ! The perfect accessory to a poem about those sexy sexy stilettos! ! ! ! Dang it, you made me giggle and here I was in a perfectly surly mood- -thank you ;)

Lovely and superb. Short n sweet. Nice to read from your pen again, hapy new year.