Wednesday, March 10, 2010

Steven Comments

Rating: 3.0

Why oh why do I love you, is it the smile or the way you stare?
Is it that kiss or the how I know you always unconditionally care
One reason is cuz I know you’ll be true
And that’s why I chose you
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AURORA BANNECKJ
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Christopher Tiganescu 15 March 2010

This is very nice, very good emotion, and that u give ur heart to someone who may be 'uncool' means alot

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Adam Reed 11 March 2010

alright i like it :) . i have read a BUNCH of love poems on this site. and this is one of my favorite. great job girl :)

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John Knight 10 March 2010

Hi Aurora - This is a lovely love poem and I am honoured to be the first to comment. It is an expression of the purity and uncomplicated nature of teenage love. I was 17 in 1950 and my experiences then mirror the sentiments in this poem. 'Why oh why do I love you? ' It is the summation of the smile - look - kissing - caring - choosing and feeling safe and secure together. 'I don't care what people think of you - I love that you are a nerd' - This is beautiful and a sure sign of True love. 'Most of all I love how much I love you'. Your love is reciprocal - ''I don't hve to act for you to like me'. He's amazed and you are dazed - AWESOME. The last three lines are perfect - this poem scores a TEN. 'Now it seems I have someone to turn to when I have so many issues in my head - You're the one I can trust to tell - my deepest secrets to - I am so thankful that I am with you'. Love to Steven and thanks for sharing your heart with us. Love in Poetry - JOHN

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