Wednesday, January 4, 2012

Sterilite Comments

Rating: 3.3

Sterilite, by his own actions, brought war upon his town…

What happened on that fateful day was quite simply astounding
At the footsteps of the courthouse, he pulled out his sword...
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David Beckham
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Omolara Olufemi Stephen 02 November 2012

The poem is another impacting literary hammer

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Michael Oliver 27 February 2012

This is so rich in its subliminal imagery. About justice? King David? Michelangelo? Public symapthy? As always with your work the ripples create more and more meanings Thanks

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Ebi Robert 05 January 2012

This is a poem featuring war and might. Beauty of life shadows..Keep it up.. We need more of this here.

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Indira Babbellapati 05 January 2012

the judicial, man's anger...a reflection of how self is the ultimate loser!

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Vipins Puthooran 04 January 2012

it's a fantastic poem! ! ! I mused for a while.. I like this poem, , , but what happened at the end? ? ? ? Good write! ! ! ! Top marks! !

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Eric Cockrell 04 January 2012

the rage of injustice... well written poem!

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