Steps To New World Comments

The use of repetition was evocative of an incantation and a mantra of message or instructions or limitations almost like a disclaimer to the physical world as opposed to the boundless ethereal. The stanzas were lyrical with good rhythm. The final stanza as a declaration to make or force change and the determination strengthened in the finale of the altered last line from the previous repetition declaring that a change or return is going to come, provided a strong and forceful conclusion.

Wonderful poem, full of imagery and very well penned.

Other than the flowing sweet rhythmic pattern what I awesomely love in this is the Imagery..... Nice work up... ~TT~

This is a picture that swimming in a dream, so ethereal and beautiful...if i can snap it using camera hahaha_Unwritten Soul

Great imagery and a beautiful write. tyvm

Wondrous images come to life in this poem. The words and meanings are intertwined with the sweet melody and flavor of this poem.

GORGEOUS! Just amazingly gorgeous words to hear. A way to break through the darkness with the light of a beautiful poem to share with all of man-kind. :) Fantastic write.

A wonderful flight of imagery and a great write. I liked it.

I love the way you end each stanza, especially the last. I'm very intrigued with the idea of the world not being as great a place as it seems, but still trying to entreat it.