Saturday, April 12, 2008

Stepping-Stones Comments

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The stepping-stones I had to cross
While standing firm so many years,
Now covered by the weed and moss
And there to dry my lonely tears,
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Duncan Wyllie 17 April 2008

The stepping-stones I had to cross To end my suffering and pain, As sunlight shone on water's gloss It lit my way to her again, I don't feel that I need to say more than what you have already written Just...Brilliant! ! Take care Andrew Love duncan X

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Alison Cassidy 13 April 2008

Andrew your ease with meter, your rapport with rhyme and your love of language captivates this reader and leaves her with a smile. Beautiful poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Thad Wilk 12 April 2008

Solid penning Andrew! Beautiful start to finish, love it! ! *10*! ! Best regards! Friend Thad

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