Sunday, December 16, 2018

Stepping Aside... Comments

Rating: 4.8

Why did you take away
the love I had for you?
killed the happy dreams
said that we were through;
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dave lessard
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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 December 2018

WOW! Sunday the 16th December 2018 submitted and Tuesday the 18th December 2018 Chosen by Poem Hunter and Team as The Member Poem Of The Day. Such a good feel, Dave. Happy to meet you again here on PH. Thank you dear Lord.

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david lessard 18 December 2018

Thanks Sylvia!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 December 2018

Most heart touching poem, loveliest rendered, sympathetically worded, lost love but luckily having not lost your personality, indeed if she was the one who broke the promise, no need to beg her back. Absolutely! Wonderful poem to read, a real treat, but bit pity, ii's all sadness and unhappiness. Thank you for this excellent poem. Most deserved as the Member Poem Of The Day. Hurray! CONGRATULATIONS. God's Blessings for you. Amen.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 December 2018

Corrected here, thank you: ...........it's all sadness and unhappiness. Still the 10 Full Vote.

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