Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Sunday, October 4, 2009

Step-In-Stone Comments

Rating: 5.0

Loud sound with heavy fall
Seemed to me as nature’s call
There was no collapse of wall
Only lightening with shining ball
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Edwina K 11 October 2009

Loud sound with heavy fall Seemed to me as nature’s call There was no collapse of wall Only lightening with shining ball

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Sadia Hussain 11 October 2009

Clouds roaming with curious move Thunderous sound adds fear but not remove

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Sunita Rao 10 October 2009

There was no collapse of wall Only lightening with shining ball

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Venkat Ramanna 10 October 2009

There was no collapse of wall Only lightening with shining ball

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K.v. Subbarao 10 October 2009

Loud sound with heavy fall Seemed to me as nature’s call There was no collapse of wall

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Darshna Chopra 10 October 2009

Loud sound with heavy fall Seemed to me as nature’s call

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Indani Narayan 09 October 2009

I saw the angel rushing from sky Shining stone in hand but couldn’t think why? May be bringing some fortune on land

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Lalvani Rekha 09 October 2009

Clouds roaming with curious move Thunderous sound adds fear but not remove Pleasant scene with changing mood

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Vijay Suwarnkar 09 October 2009

Clouds roaming with curious move Thunderous sound adds fear but not remove

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Sulochna Pandit 09 October 2009

Loud sound with heavy fall Seemed to me as nature’s call There was no collapse of wall Only lightening with shining ball

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Raju Rajput 09 October 2009

Loud sound with heavy fall Seemed to me as nature’s call

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Marieta Maglas 08 October 2009

Clouds roaming with curious move Thunderous sound adds fear but not remove Pleasant scene with changing mood Rain may bring happiness and fortune good excellent descriptive poem, thank you for sharing..10++++++++++

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AtreyaSarma Uppaluri 08 October 2009

You’ve rightly said that heavenly messages can be read by “Only pure hearts” and by only those for whom they are intended. “Message on stone” could signify that it is of eternal value. A good reflective poem with an aesthetic touch.

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Maulin Shah 07 October 2009

saw the angel rushing from sky Shining stone in hand but couldn’t think why? May be bringing some fortune on land

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Suwarna Patil 07 October 2009

saw the angel rushing from sky Shining stone in hand but couldn’t think why? May be bringing some fortune on land Wings so wide spread with raised hands

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Kamli Kamal 07 October 2009

There was no collapse of wall Only lightening with shining ball

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Ketan Rajgor 07 October 2009

Loud sound with heavy fall Seemed to me as nature’s call

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Poonam Suthar 06 October 2009

Clouds roaming with curious move Thunderous sound adds fear but not remove

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Umesh Lalvani 06 October 2009

I tried to decode message on stone It was for me and for me alone I should be convinced with honesty behind

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Chetna Purohit 06 October 2009

Pleasant scene with changing mood Rain may bring happiness and fortune good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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