Friday, September 2, 2005

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I will lift you up
Then, I will lift you up
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I will lift you up
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Tears In Rain
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Lylyanna Pilewski 07 September 2005

Love it as always! Lylyanna

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Raynette Eitel 04 September 2005

I really like this but think the fourth stanza ought to go. It doesn't have the majesty of the rest of your poem, in my opinion. The rest sounds like a song. Rayneette

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