Across the sea,
I am sailing
With the soul
Afraid of dying,
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Very loving and passionate, Aung si. Nice romantic touches in the lines. Keep on posting!
I like it, although this is a love poem, it has really good and smart procedure.Ok.this time, i won't tell you that you wore your heart in your sleeve in writing this poem! .May be the other's one, isn't it?
the poem has a flow about it.....nice.....