Thursday, August 16, 2012

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Across the sea,
I am sailing
With the soul
Afraid of dying,
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aung si myanmar
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Deep Mukherjee 18 October 2012

the poem has a flow about it.....nice.....

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 02 October 2012

Very loving and passionate, Aung si. Nice romantic touches in the lines. Keep on posting!

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Eindaray Kyaw 17 August 2012

I like it, although this is a love poem, it has really good and smart procedure.Ok.this time, i won't tell you that you wore your heart in your sleeve in writing this poem! .May be the other's one, isn't it?

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