Sunday, September 30, 2012

Steering Precision Comments

Rating: 5.0

For years I've hugged a dream
Not a very lady-like one
But then again
Who said, I am a lady?
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karen sinclair
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Smoky Hoss 13 November 2012

How could anyone not be struck with the joy of wonder upon reading this poem! Fantastic!

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Simple in its profoundity and profound in its simplicity. A wonderful way to make something magnificent with the mondane. Well done my friend!

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Danny Draper 01 October 2012

Crash an burn, but go out like a shooting star down that slope, fearless and when the death wobbles come hang on for grim death and if living to tell the tale become a legend. What a great dream at any age.

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Valsa George 01 October 2012

A strange fancy! But if you are so obsessed about it, why wait to make it at a time when you grow older than you are? At a later stage, a ride down a deep gradient might become risky! An interesting write!

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Mark Dillon 01 October 2012

nice one karen.nice memories, i built a few from the scraps you mention, it was as good as an f1 to me then, tfs.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 30 September 2012

With dogged OCD Knowing myself and the core of me.... a thought provoking poem! a go cart to scream! Nice!

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