Steep Comments

And that tea, of course, is Twinings Earl Grey! A very clever and witty haiku, M.J. Love it!

Perfect tea on a mountain peak. Brilliant stroke dear Mark. Top stars for the Steep

Even though I am not a tea drinker I love this Haiku Mark, read some of my new poems

To achieve the hard and difficult, we have to really sweat out! What sharpness of presentation and what profound brevity! You are a master of this form Mj.....

Being Inspired by Steep a poem of M.J. Lemon. Difficult was the way to the top of the steep mountain, As I could not climb, I became a knave, And I dived in the hot streams of a fountain, I left myself on the mercy of waves, My mother kissed my forehead and sang, My son will be a cause of another big bang.

beautiful, price paid and received too, balance is necessary to achieve the beauty of living in civilization.

yes the agony estacy of exquisite experiences succintly put 10+

Very intriguing how you put these images together! I found myself going back to how we challenge ourselves and even do the impossible.

you got me to laugh out loud & snort a bit. Nice! - Rich =: -)

Oh, ho, you like to pun around, don't you? ? ? I love puns, I love brevity, I am impressed by senryu. In you, I get all 3 wrapped up with a cheery grin! Thank you for the pleasant word and laugh to start off my day! Well done to the tune of 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

On a mountain peak! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

In a mountain peak! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.