Wednesday, April 27, 2005

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The old blue Commodore
Parked casually on the grass in the backyard
The lackluster patina of corrosion
Oozing from every rusty pore
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Elizabeth Russell
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Jerry Hughes 06 February 2006

it has ever been thus...

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Scarborough Gypsy 06 February 2006

This is awesome! We also have an old blue commodore parked up on the grass. I have a picture of my son as my screen saver, standing in front of the open bonneted car with a spanner in his hand. Your poem captures this male ritual brilliantly. Loved it love Gyp's

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