Thursday, February 19, 2009

Steamy Tease Comments

Rating: 3.8

Laying here in the bath just soaking
I saw that gleam in your eyes, they were smoking
Passion oozing from every pore
Slipping in with me once more
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Gordon D Wilkinson
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John Richter 14 May 2015

Sadly the rest has been censored here! Funny! Good poem Gordon...

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Jasbir Chatterjee 14 May 2015

For a change, PH has selected a different kind of a poem as poem of the day. I simply loved it. Congrats Gordon!

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Rosalita Fernandez 11 June 2009

! ! ! ! ! ! ! I like it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Fiona Davidson 21 February 2009

Fans self...phewww nice write Gordon...good read full of imagery...thank you...10++

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Stephen Stirk 19 February 2009

A really steamy poem written in a unique style. A refreshing twist. A new kind of eroticism. I really enjoyed this. Welcome aboard sir........10 Steve

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 19 February 2009

Well don't you just love bath time, great work Gordon and welcome to poemhunter 10

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Gordon D Wilkinson

Gordon D Wilkinson

Oxford - England
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