Thursday, February 18, 2010

Steampunk Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Clockwork ticker, beating pulse
It lives and loves on wild impulse
Shiver and shake like feverish imps
If you look inside and take a glimpse
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R K Summers
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Raynette Eitel 18 February 2010

You handled the rhyme in this poem nicely, Rebecca. I love the title...and your 'mechanical' illusions make for a grand metaphor. Nice work. Raynette

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