I desired to behold her face
But she turned away a single pace.
I desired to get close to her
But she would no glimpse spare.
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A nice poetic imagination, Allotery. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
A beautiful poetry, nice flow and rhythm Love truly is magical, the real feelings comes when there is problem..10+
A poem of beauty, keep writing. A kind so rare, unannexed. giving you an opportunity. Great construction.
This poem I thoroughly enjoyed reading. The path to true love is never an easy one but one that is well worth taking.
My friend do not despair One day her true feelings she'll bare Thanks-10
Beautiful. Like a true poet you bring a longing, as experienced by so many of us into very melodic verses. A true work of art. I fully enjoyed reading it.
I relate to this poem too. It's those emotions make that admiration for someone very interesting. Nice work man.
Sure. That is my plea too: to make your heart glee. Nice work
Sure. That is my plea too: to make your heart glee. Nive work
i have very little understanding of poem though i liked it..keep it up cheers
Love love love... We cant really choose who to love. It just comes on its own... Thanks for sharing your thoughts Allotey.
True love in the beginning, hoping to be taken into one's heart waiting breathlessly for it to happen. A beautiful poem on love. Thank you for sharing it, RoseAnn
Your pen reveals true love in this poem Stealing Glances so brightly and aptly envisioned. True love needs patience. Enjoyed. Thanks for posting such intensive poem.
Her love and beauty! Hoping that she will stay with me. Nice work with the muse of love.
It will take a second reading to really appreciate the depths... thats good. The lady makes me think of a true African lady...
I love the way this poem flows so well you forget you're reading a poem and just feel for the sufferer.