Sunday, July 19, 2015

Stealing Glances Comments

Rating: 4.8

I desired to behold her face
But she turned away a single pace.
I desired to get close to her
But she would no glimpse spare.
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Abossey Allotey
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Stephen Katona 01 November 2017

I love the way this poem flows so well you forget you're reading a poem and just feel for the sufferer.

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Jazib Kamalvi 20 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Allotery. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Allotey Abossey 14 October 2017

Thank you friend. Sure will go through

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Lisa Marie Mottert 02 March 2016

Beautiful poem with a nice rhythmic flow!

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Allotey Abossey 14 October 2017

Thank you.

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 13 February 2016

A beautiful poetry, nice flow and rhythm Love truly is magical, the real feelings comes when there is problem..10+

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Howard Savage 06 January 2016

A poem of beauty, keep writing. A kind so rare, unannexed. giving you an opportunity. Great construction.

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Danielle Elsworth 02 November 2015

This poem I thoroughly enjoyed reading. The path to true love is never an easy one but one that is well worth taking.

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Loke Kok Yee 26 October 2015

My friend do not despair One day her true feelings she'll bare Thanks-10

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Pen Anthony 15 October 2015

The flow and the diction are excellent

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Hans Vr 27 August 2015

Beautiful. Like a true poet you bring a longing, as experienced by so many of us into very melodic verses. A true work of art. I fully enjoyed reading it.

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Kelly Kurt 24 August 2015

A wonderful poem, Allotey.

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Hemendra Singh Deopa 11 August 2015

I relate to this poem too. It's those emotions make that admiration for someone very interesting. Nice work man.

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Sure. That is my plea too: to make your heart glee. Nice work

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Sure. That is my plea too: to make your heart glee. Nive work

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Iam Anam 28 July 2015

i have very little understanding of poem though i liked it..keep it up cheers

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Kate Lechoe 27 July 2015

Love love love... We cant really choose who to love. It just comes on its own... Thanks for sharing your thoughts Allotey.

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Roseann Shawiak 25 July 2015

True love in the beginning, hoping to be taken into one's heart waiting breathlessly for it to happen. A beautiful poem on love. Thank you for sharing it, RoseAnn

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Corazone Aquino 23 July 2015

heart felt. A great piece.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 July 2015

Your pen reveals true love in this poem Stealing Glances so brightly and aptly envisioned. True love needs patience. Enjoyed. Thanks for posting such intensive poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 July 2015

Her love and beauty! Hoping that she will stay with me. Nice work with the muse of love.

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Ifegwu Victor 22 July 2015

It will take a second reading to really appreciate the depths... thats good. The lady makes me think of a true African lady...

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