Monday, August 31, 2020

Steady Moments Comments

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I dread those moments
when infatuation begins
to be commitment.
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Ace Of Black Hearts 31 August 2020

Commitment comes in different scales. But possession and obligation should never be ones. The words 'I don't want to but have to' are the sounds of a fresh relationship dying. You should always want to do what needs to be done for the ones you love. The words 'you're mine' should never mean you have to give everything else in your life. Too much sacrifice makes you prisoner of what you thought was love. Excellent inspiring poem, thanks for sharing.

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Alex Sarich 31 August 2020

great write. So true about commitment, why one has to have that course of action I don't know. Maybe insecurities?

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Deluke Muwanigwa 31 August 2020

Lol. No she is not bitchy. She is pacing herself. Then again she is being obstinate. Make up your mind mademoiselle. Good poem.

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