Saturday, June 20, 2020

Staying Together Comments

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You may forget me, dearest,
And I may forget you too.
Our children, friends
Have all slinked away
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Jasbir Chatterjee
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Rajnish Manga 21 June 2020

Like a magician you can create beauties out of nothing. While I appreciate your photographic skills gone into this photo of a pair of pigeons, the reader is no less blessed to be treated with this fabulous poem which can be applied to human beings as much as to the birds. Thank you, Jasbir ji. This magic is the secret of your popularity.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 June 2020

There is emotional and strong promise of living together. The separation is temporary. There will be union as love attracts to live in mutual understanding and cooperation. Promise made will be fulfilled. With glaring sunshine, dearest will of course grow older in the chilling of winter or hotness of summer and still death, togetherness will be witnessed. An excellent poem is nicely penned...10

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