Staying Power Comments

ur just 23 all by now know hence your poem is fresh also do read and reply comments if you wish to do so improve others staying power also ur poetry is lovely @1994 born maybe 21 Mar 1994

YOu got what it takes! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

a god loves a trier poem? it's the taking part that counts! well written.