Saturday, March 17, 2012

Staying Away Is Not Really A Choice Comments

Rating: ★4.5

Staying away is not really a choice
not when i need to ear your voice
i can't accept being pushed aside
altough i know you're not really mine
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Carlos Daniel Neves
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Fox Tail 23 March 2012

Very nice. There's like a conflict between two parts of an event happening in the poem and that seems like a new approach to poetry and rhyming to me. Enjoyed the poem and pondered over the spelling.: D -Fox_TaIL-

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Carlos Daniel Neves

Carlos Daniel Neves

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