Staying Afloat Comments

You painted a hard situation in such a beautiful way that one forgets at the end that it conserns really a hard one.So your poem proved that things have the colour we do dare to think they have.Do live, dear, in these beautiful colours you used in the poem.

Enjoyed your poems...especially this one...seems very timely

Your writing inspires. It would be good to have the message of your poem available for all especially those whose emotions have started on the downwoard slope. Anothe good poem

True Jasbir courage keeps us afloat...darkness disappears and light of hope appears...