Friday, May 13, 2011

Staying Above Water Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes I get up and believe I'm not quite awake
Because images of my dreams still make me ache
At times I think I am a child and waiting for my mother
Only to find out that she's not here and is lost like many other
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Kristina Louisa Carr
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 13 May 2011

Awesome work. Great sentiments with nice style. Great write indeed. I rate it 10. TFS. Please read and rate my poem 'A deal in helplessness' on page 1.

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Kristina Louisa Carr

Kristina Louisa Carr

Born: Cape Town, South Africa
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