stay with me my angel
i need you now and again
stay with me my angel
you know your my only friend
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Not bad...I love how you sounded in this poem. You have so much emotion in your words that they could come up and slap you in the face, good job on showing how you feel. But could you use more capitals? Sorry but it's like one of my pet peeves I might use too many capitals Good write! ! ! With all the love and hate I have to offer- JH
It has some good points here and there. Im not much for love poems but this some is simple and I'll admit sweet. Keep up the good work, and think about the flow of the worlds next time.7
Thats an amazing poem chris. I love it. you are an amazing writer! Keep up the great work.
aww. its really cute and sweet. i like it alot. i give it a 10
Chris the angel shall not leave and if it dose you can talk with me
waav, , fine rythm in your lines, , , surely the angel will stay, , , , keep going chris
awwwwwwwwwwww its so beautiful