Thursday, May 29, 2008

Stay With Me My Angel Comments

Rating: 4.6

stay with me my angel
i need you now and again
stay with me my angel
you know your my only friend
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Christopher Leone
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Kasey Jessie 15 May 2014

awwwwwwwwwwww its so beautiful

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Jodie Hardy 26 August 2013

Lovely poem, I think it is beautiful Jo x

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Tiny Dancer 03 February 2009

This is good. I like it!

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Kt Reynolds 05 June 2008

Not bad...I love how you sounded in this poem. You have so much emotion in your words that they could come up and slap you in the face, good job on showing how you feel. But could you use more capitals? Sorry but it's like one of my pet peeves I might use too many capitals Good write! ! ! With all the love and hate I have to offer- JH

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Ashley Burnam 30 May 2008

It has some good points here and there. Im not much for love poems but this some is simple and I'll admit sweet. Keep up the good work, and think about the flow of the worlds next time.7

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Candice Anderson 29 May 2008

Thats an amazing poem chris. I love it. you are an amazing writer! Keep up the great work.

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Serenity Prayer 29 May 2008

aww. its really cute and sweet. i like it alot. i give it a 10

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Clarissa Tobey 29 May 2008

Chris the angel shall not leave and if it dose you can talk with me

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Sadiqullah Khan 29 May 2008

waav, , fine rythm in your lines, , , surely the angel will stay, , , , keep going chris

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