Friday, May 15, 2009

Stay With Me For A While Comments

Rating: 1.7

Stay with me for a while...(Kucch dair hamarey saath raho)
1- Let some of your colors sprinkle around......................................(Kucch apney rung bikharney do)
2- Animate the world with some of your fragrance.............. (Kucch apni khushboo bikhra'o)
3- And in a sweet dewy accent............................................................. (aur sheereen shabnami lehjey mein)
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Kausar Mahmood
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Saadat Tahir 24 May 2009

hi kausar.. i think the voters have been unduly harsh on you in fact its very very nice with a very thoughtful historic reference... i think the numbering is what must have put off the voters.. i feel you could edit that out...'i think' ofcourse its your poem and u do as u like i would still like to give it ten cheers

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