Friday, June 4, 2010

Stay With Me Baby When The Lights Go Down Comments

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Another day without you and this is another night
Without you in my life there is no light
Darkness and sadness has since prevailed
I wish I could hold our train from getting derailed.
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Aakash Goyal
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Aakash Goyal 25 June 2010

thank you so much...

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Heartfelt, pray love finds its way back to you! Well written.; D

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Aakash Goyal 17 June 2010

thank you so much Courtney Shanahan... i am really happy that u liked my poem and it touched ur heart... thanx again for commenting... keep writing, regards

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Courtney Shanahan 16 June 2010

This poem is fantastic. I honestly felt like crying. It was so sweet and there are so many people out there that can relate to your poem. You are a great writer.

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Aakash Goyal 12 June 2010

@zks: thanx a lot dude.. its all coz of ur support and suggestions that i have been able to write such stuff... thanks for encouraging me to write such poems and for showing this website: -)

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Aakash Goyal 12 June 2010

@victoria: thanx a lot dear...i am just a beginner actually and ur comments about my poems means a lot to me..i have also read some of ur poems and they are just awesome.. thanx a lot once again and keep writing

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Zks Smith 10 June 2010

This is a nice poem, you are extremely talented my friend!

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Victoria Korobochka 04 June 2010

OMG! I love your poem, it's so sweet! I so wish I was the one to write that! Please write more poems like that, and I'l search up more poems by you! I wish I could have your inspiration even though this is the first poem I've read by you, kk!

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