Saturday, November 29, 2014

Stay With Me! ! ! Comments

Rating: 4.5

Stay here with me
I need you to be here, at the side of me
Now that I am having issues that try me
It will be the best time to see your loyalty to me
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G. Akanji Olaniyi
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Uche Nwanze 11 September 2019

Patience is a virtue, very insightful and inspiring write.

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Maveriqué Richard 23 September 2016

As true as it seems, real friends don't just come by.

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Toluwanimi Ibikunle 07 July 2016

nice work sir. Thanks for sharing.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 03 December 2015

While reading the poem, felt as if a god friend is by my side. Very passionate and sensational too.

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Liza Sudina 14 October 2015

True friends are few in a million! - it's true! But why so sad? why can't all people be friends? why such a life? such a human race?

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Melvina Germain 13 October 2015

friendships are the jewels of life if they are true to form. I enjoyed reading this poem and your ability to rhyme each line, nicely done.....

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Babatunde Aremu 03 September 2015

Nice write! A quest for true friendship. Hope we have friends that stay glued all season

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Patricia Grantham 10 August 2015

A lovely poem on friendship. A true friend is rare indeed. Nice.

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David Akintola 26 May 2015

Nice poem!!!

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 12 May 2015

I enjoy the simplistic and direct approah of this poem. It is honest. 'Stay With Me' is very nice.

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Rajnish Manga 29 November 2014

This lovely poem, as a matter of fact, is devoted to the genuine friendships. Following lines of the poem are most impressive- True friends are few in a million. You and only you, I have in a trillion

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