Tuesday, June 12, 2012

Stay With Me Comments

Rating: 4.9

Stay just one more day with me
Don`t fly away or sail the sea
Stay and soothe my trembling heart
Stay that we may never part
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Valerie Dohren
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Walterrean Salley 16 July 2012

So rich and telling. Full of the purest of emotions, straight from the heart. Beautifully expressed. Thank you for sharing it.

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Sylvia Lukeman 05 July 2012

I find myself very comfortable within the words of your poem.This poem is beautiful. Thank your for your very kind comments about my poems I hope to get back to you poetry very soon..Warm wishes Sylvia

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James Cecil 02 July 2012

Loved it! Simple and true. Are not simple gifts the best?

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The Reader 02 July 2012

Just? one more day? will that suffice dear poet? it's an earnest request, plz make it timeless-

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Meena Mustafa 01 July 2012

Such a romantic poem :) made me smile :))))))

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Sally Plumb Plumb 27 June 2012

Lovely to see a love poem from you, Val.

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Simon Collins 25 June 2012

Really moving, beautiful words

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The Poet Darkling 22 June 2012

This is absolutely lovely! So heartfelt and packed with emotion! I'm giving you a standing ovation! !

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Linda May Fox 20 June 2012

This is so beautiful!

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Juan Olivarez 20 June 2012

Ah yes a true lament of a heart sorrowful for the departure of a loved one. so beautiful val.

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Hans Vr 19 June 2012

Beautiful and thoughtful poem, Valerie. We want our loved ones to stay. So nicely and melodiously expressed.

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Ramesh Rai 19 June 2012

Stay until the sun doth set Stay so close that I won`t fret You and I will watch the moon Do not leave me yet, so soon Beautiful.

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Romeo Della Valle 18 June 2012

Wow! What a beautiful romantic poem that took my breath away! You know my dear friend that when it comes to matters of the heart I truly shake! Beautiful and touching! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it! God Bless. You!

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Neela Nath Das 18 June 2012

Very earnest poetic request. Well-crafted, romantic and heart-warming.

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Romeo Della Valle 18 June 2012

Wow! What a beautiful romantic poem that took my breath away! You know my dear friend that when it comes to matters of the heart I truly shake! Beautiful and touching! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it! God Bless. You!

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Eric Cockrell 15 June 2012

a beautiful poem.... tinged with both sadness and joy!

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Captain Cur 14 June 2012

I pray that you will have that wish. I know how difficult it is to write about such personal a matter. Tenderly and lovingly expressed.

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Karen Sinclair 14 June 2012

beautiful... in pain and love... just so sad yet soothing in tone.. tyvm karen

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Joseph Anderson 14 June 2012

I sense the urgency.A poignant, heart wrenching plea, rendered with touching tenderness. A memorable write that will linger with me

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Vincent Kuo 14 June 2012

What a sensitive poem, it's put me in such a tender mood I'm hesitant to comment. To say the least, Valerie, I admire your ability to completely take me away in your poetry! Excellent!

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