Stay just one more day with me
Don`t fly away or sail the sea
Stay and soothe my trembling heart
Stay that we may never part
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I find myself very comfortable within the words of your poem.This poem is beautiful. Thank your for your very kind comments about my poems I hope to get back to you poetry very soon..Warm wishes Sylvia
Just? one more day? will that suffice dear poet? it's an earnest request, plz make it timeless-
This is absolutely lovely! So heartfelt and packed with emotion! I'm giving you a standing ovation! !
Ah yes a true lament of a heart sorrowful for the departure of a loved one. so beautiful val.
Beautiful and thoughtful poem, Valerie. We want our loved ones to stay. So nicely and melodiously expressed.
Stay until the sun doth set Stay so close that I won`t fret You and I will watch the moon Do not leave me yet, so soon Beautiful.
Wow! What a beautiful romantic poem that took my breath away! You know my dear friend that when it comes to matters of the heart I truly shake! Beautiful and touching! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it! God Bless. You!
Very earnest poetic request. Well-crafted, romantic and heart-warming.
Wow! What a beautiful romantic poem that took my breath away! You know my dear friend that when it comes to matters of the heart I truly shake! Beautiful and touching! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it! God Bless. You!
I pray that you will have that wish. I know how difficult it is to write about such personal a matter. Tenderly and lovingly expressed.
beautiful... in pain and love... just so sad yet soothing in tone.. tyvm karen
I sense the urgency.A poignant, heart wrenching plea, rendered with touching tenderness. A memorable write that will linger with me
What a sensitive poem, it's put me in such a tender mood I'm hesitant to comment. To say the least, Valerie, I admire your ability to completely take me away in your poetry! Excellent!
So rich and telling. Full of the purest of emotions, straight from the heart. Beautifully expressed. Thank you for sharing it.