Thursday, October 9, 2008

Stay With Me Comments

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Stay here with me,
I'm not whole without you.
Can't you see?
Please don't go away
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Dr.subhendu Kar 22 October 2008

My knight and shining armor............... love wishful by the thrills of heart passion overwhelms by desire yet it whispers kisses by silky breath eyes meanders in redolence by blues...........wonderful epithet of love in resilience, eloquence flows by the passin, ingeniously luscious, heart yet paints the art of love, yet wrought superbly by imagery,10+, thankas for sharing

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Tanya Stanford 09 October 2008

This is so beautiful. True love emotion flows out of the word use. Lovely composition.

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