Wednesday, January 21, 2009

Stay Off The Angels, I Tell You So! ! ! ! Comments

Rating: 5.0

A dry soundless scream is stiffled
nails sink in and head shakes violently

hair is strewn and swollen breasts heave
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sreelekha premjit
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Gil Valiente 23 January 2009

Thank you for this recommendation. I'm glad to have read it. Thank you...10

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Deva De Silva 22 January 2009

You paint raw feelings of frustration and misery through strong verses. I hear screams... I feel pain... I see injustice... I sense a hope for change at the same time. 'if need be she can change her stand' Yet angles remain indifferent and a lone angry voice stand up for them. This is what I see... Thanks. Deva

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Fiona Davidson 22 January 2009

Strong images you've painted here...well said and written...thank you...Fi

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 22 January 2009

So eloquently said Sreelekha, with powerful and thought provoking words...10

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Kesav Easwaran 21 January 2009

powerful words...powerful warning...should pierce many a guilty hearts to bleed...10

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Sadiqullah Khan 21 January 2009

prey not upon the daughters so! ! ! stay off the angels, i tell you so! ! ! ! , , , , , , , , how angry and how true, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,

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