A dry soundless scream is stiffled
nails sink in and head shakes violently
hair is strewn and swollen breasts heave
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You paint raw feelings of frustration and misery through strong verses. I hear screams... I feel pain... I see injustice... I sense a hope for change at the same time. 'if need be she can change her stand' Yet angles remain indifferent and a lone angry voice stand up for them. This is what I see... Thanks. Deva
Strong images you've painted here...well said and written...thank you...Fi
So eloquently said Sreelekha, with powerful and thought provoking words...10
powerful words...powerful warning...should pierce many a guilty hearts to bleed...10
prey not upon the daughters so! ! ! stay off the angels, i tell you so! ! ! ! , , , , , , , , how angry and how true, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,
Thank you for this recommendation. I'm glad to have read it. Thank you...10