Stay Alive Comments

A nice one! Pondering too much about the difficulties will always take away the life out of life!

'for just a little bit more'... That's the crux! A beautiful prayer, well written. Thanks for the notes.

full of emotions, so touching for deep of feeling beautiful poem thanks for sharing

thanks for those who comment.... to Norazah Norddin: thank you for feel the poem deeply...it's exactly what I wanted anyway... to Gajanan Mishra: yeah, sure, why not? and thanks too...

Very nice poem. Very deep. I can tell that it is about someone we love, a dad to be precised. I can imagine your situation right thru your poem..loved it! : D