Sunday, February 8, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

Stay
and be my love.
Together we can fly over rainbows
and dwell in the heavens above.
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Monica May
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Greenwolfe 1962 08 February 2009

Oh what a writer of poems this is. Rhythm and rhyme. Great structure and repetition. Wow! Does Monica know poetry or what? GW62

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Carl Harris 08 February 2009

This is a wonderfully phrased romantic poem which is quite beautifully written and expressed, Monica. I thought the repetition of the first verse as the final verse was an excellent idea, and made great poetic sense. Not many poets have the savvy to use this quite effective technique. Carl.

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