Monday, May 20, 2013

>Status Of My Garden Comments

Rating: 4.5

You nourished the garden
With all your sweet and blood

You love it
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Abdul Wahab
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Heather Wilkins 23 May 2013

In this garden the gardner must feed and nourish his blossom. He must weed carefully every day. Always protecting it from the storms. If cared for properly it will return him much happiness. A wise gardner can relate to your verse.

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Spiritual Seeker 22 May 2013

I like this poem v much...the seen and hidden. A big 10.

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Sallam Yassin 21 May 2013

the beauty and the grace of that garden i see in deep your heart and twist of your words sweet/ well done and thanks to share

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Tribhawan Kaul 21 May 2013

I like this poem because somehow I relate with it. It reminds me of my birthplace. It reminds me of my family trying to stand on its own.during adversities. I love the metaphors used in this poem but the life has been like that only. A lovely write :)

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 20 May 2013

beautiful poem with imagery Rose and Jasmine here love and revolt of mind, , my garden my self /soul/ mind etc well write 10/10 bhai

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 20 May 2013

beautiful poem with imagery Rose and Jasmine here love and revolt of mind, , my garden my self /soul/ mind etc well write 10/10 bhai

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Rafique Farooqi 20 May 2013

beautiful work as always

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