Tuesday, May 10, 2016

Statue Of Stone Comments

Rating: 4.8

The pedestrians whether young or old
Even the terminal even cold fire crop
Must look at me! ay my face for a moment
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SRIRANJI ARATISANKAR
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Anne Yun 30 August 2016

There is no getting rid of a piece of art as statue of stone, its power sure can capture every pedestrain's eyes, i am one among them.

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A. Bhadury 29 August 2016

An excellent poem, indeed...

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Gandalf The Grey 23 August 2016

One cannot get rid of his inherent human nature.Lust is one of them, depicted nicely.

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B.m. Biswas 16 July 2016

aforistic saying the very poem is...... ...nurul.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 04 June 2016

The idea behind the poem is good and if edited further, its power can be multiplied several times over...

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Binayak Dutta 23 May 2016

nice massage through your poem.like it very much

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Tom Billsborough 23 May 2016

I guess we men are pretty much the same here! The comparison with the statue is very clever. In the second stanza I'm not sure of the wording although the meaning is clear! Do You mean I know some who look at two(breasts) first. If so I think the first should be the last word. This is a minor point in what is a good and original poem. I'd give you an 8

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Kishore Kumar Das 23 May 2016

You have struck the chord with readers by fixing a common topic..there are many such beautiful statues in the park.....but beauty is not just skin-deep...it is a real divine feeling to praise beauty... thanks for your hair-raising lines...

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Kelly Kurt 21 May 2016

Even I succumb to looking lower after meeting the eyes. It is instilled in us by society and media.

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Soumita Sarkar 18 May 2016

statues see it all..good or evil...time and sun.....good

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 May 2016

Whether young or old! Learning the ways of life. Thanks for sharing.

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Thank you Louis for your opinion.

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There is no getting rid of... Nicely done.10

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Ha ha ha... u are right. Thank u for going through the poem.

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Ha ha ha you are right. Thank you for going through the poem.

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Rajnish Manga 10 May 2016

I think we should not generalise. However, I appreciate your style. Thanks, Sriranji.

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Thank you Rajnish.

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