Static Comments

Profound expression....truthful and a reality!

between my self and face I'm sorry. nice

between my self and face I'm sorry. nice

And the brave is one who firmly has power to remove the gap b/w abstract and concrete. but often it occurs...nicely presented poem of your static feeling :) keep on sharing

Engulfing despair! Often we feel like this.You expressed your the then feelings nicely.

~we have all choices in life we despise some but its all is part of knowledge of ours life ~

When the route ends turn around different routes are open; need not be empty we will get fruits amply.This poem of despair is intensive.

Dear Aswath, if you are again writing any such poems, I will not comment on it..Write some positive or Inspirational poem so that it gives the readers too a great message..You are future leaders of the country, if you sing melancholoy songs what will be the outcome..Please do come with some beautiful poems, so that it spread the light of wisdom..Am sorry, if am too harsh in my comments..

.... And yet another death poem is in your mind! Be dynamic Aswath for a little longer and go for a subdued outlook at these fantasised woes queuing up somewhere. About turn!

u becoming shaky again! ! ! ! ! i hope al i wel

Why this pendulam swing, Aswath? ?

but the choice is not ours just keep your magic box open delivering beautiful poems and we will continue to read

I hear an unknown sparrow sing, For life that has not lost, ... this is a good sign in a bleak world...at least a sparrow sings, at least there is some life that is not lost! Stasis is defined as a state of stability in which all forces are equal and opposing, therefore they cancel out each other...it is not all negative...but the post script is noteworthy! ! !