Saturday, October 27, 2012

States Of Mind Comments

Rating: 4.9

Frustrated

I felt frustrated
As I saw you
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Indranil Bhaduri
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Rendered in the perspective of a poet with gravity of matter truamatic to many. Well executed Mr Indrani.

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Sanjay Mehta 16 December 2012

Life is to be enjoyed, not endured. Finding joy even in parting of one's beloved implies that only the positive aspects are being given priority, its great. An saying goes, If you don't know where you are going the road will take you there.

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Jessica Lee 16 December 2012

Everything is very well written and emotional, it all ties in very well C:

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Rishit Desai 30 November 2012

Emotions are well expressed.

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 29 November 2012

Well written..and well composed..very emotive and creative..

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Tanveer Sharma 16 November 2012

simply amazing composition

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Maggie Munro 15 November 2012

Noble progression of sentiments encapsulated in this piece. Well done.

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Sara 14 November 2012

Great poem! Situations never only ever fixate on one emotion; its EVERY emotion in the spectrum. This was a very good write (:

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Maria Paz Samelo 10 November 2012

wow! ! great composition friend Indranil..I like it.. good luck to all your poems. Have a nice day.

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Joe No 10 November 2012

thank for your kind words about my poem dust, and i must say your poems about love hit the mark for me. joe

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Philo Yan 09 November 2012

Your description of the emotional turmoil one has to go through when love is lost and especially when the one you had once loved then finds another new love before you do is spot on. And in the end by accepting her happiness, you let go of all the negative emotions so that you will be happy and free to love again of if not, move forward with your own life.

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Prasanna Kumari 07 November 2012

that is how it is...the human situation and emotions well expressed...

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Bibhakar Dutta 07 November 2012

good words..... you have written

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Elena Sandu 07 November 2012

Well written you surely seem to know a lot about people's crisis how state of mind could go almost an instant from frustrating to terrify, how sadness give them time to clean the heart by tears to the only road that forgiveness have ever given the road to real love. A heart full of love that is the happy house...Great true write, thank you for share.

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How systematically have you dilated upon the phases of the paradoxical life involving one woman and more men! It is a forgone conclusion that as a wrathful lover your refinement is much more of a solace. A piece of special price indeed dear Bhaduri. I give a 10 for it

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Jahan Zeb 06 November 2012

Frustrated, Terrified, and sad did not made me sad but when you said you are happy I felt sadness. The feelings of losing love because of a reason that is beyond you power! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! It is not fair. This is the poem with the saddest feeling I have ever read on poem hunter.... Very very Good Write The words chosen are superb and treatment of the subject is of poetic qualities. Really really nice Sir.

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So Close 06 November 2012

I got something different from it....and the sad part i liked it very much...true feelings flows... »so close«

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Neela Nath Das 02 November 2012

Yes, once hurt in love dual personality works then.Magnetic.

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Yash Shinde 28 October 2012

very touching....well expressed.........the last stanza evokes hope in one's mind and shows a ray of hope to follow in life...............very beautifully expressed :)

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Anita Sehgal 27 October 2012

very touching..pathos well expressed..

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Indranil Bhaduri

Indranil Bhaduri

Kolkata, India
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