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The clouds claim the sky
The waves have the sea
The unborn child
Has the womb of his mother
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Rose Marie all human beings have rights and like the air that we all breath should be aired and never confined. Long live the human spirit that dwells in every soul. A powerful and heartfelt poem so wonderfully expressed. Five stars worthy of each and thank you.
An insightful piece of work of great impact! Brilliantly drafted!
I am at the mercy Of your mighty hands Begging that even just a moment Someone gives solace And shares a place With this rootless human being......nice poetic expression. This is really a beautiful pom. Thanks for sharing.
Very good poem...It is hard to choose a favorite when all your poems are so beautifully written...10+++
Rose Marie, this is one of your best. Very impressive.+++++10 Robert
Thank you for your kindness, Robert. Your great comment fuels my pen to write more.
I know the feeling. You have not only expressed it perfectly but with such faithful and hurting images and feelings that go straight to the heart in an excellent poem, quite apart!
Thank you for your kind words, Sandra. I cannot thank you enough.
Someone gives solace And shares a place With this rootless human being.....Beautiful lines of a touching poem.
FANTASTIC! the opening lines alone drew me immediately and the rest of the work was paved with passion, politics like nature is an untamed force that we are always at the mercy but rarely ever the helm. We are claimed to the earth. A great poem!
Such a fantastic comments, Kevin. I feel humbled and honored. Thank.you for the visit and time.
A beautiful poem, fabulous use of similes! ..Of the rocks Like the wind That twists and turns Like the weed -Liked the elegant expression...10
Your great comments, Dr. Dillip are greatly appreciated. They will always be treasured.
The clouds claim the sky The wave haves the sea Very well written THANK YOU FOR SHARING Rose Mario Odekerken
Thank you for taking time to read my poem. Thank you too for your nice comment.
Thank you Bernard. It is always gratifying whenever a countryman notices and appreciates your work.Thank you for your time
Human beings has inheritable rights. The clouds claim the sky and the waves have the sea. Talking about mother and unborn child's rights you have expressed an amazing humour. This political poem is very brilliantly penned.10
Thank you Kumarmani for always liking my poems. Your very inspiring and intelligent insights drive one's mind to formulate more ideas.
Thank you Kumarmani for always liking my poems. Your inspiring and intelligent comments always drive one's mind to formulate ideas
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7/21/2025 8:09:09 PM # 1.0.0
All similes used are extremely wonderful.Thanks to your expressing ability and brilliant thoughts.Compliments Mam.