Tuesday, December 1, 2015

...Starts With You Comments

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We’re asked if we’re there yet

But just last night around my block
Justice was fighting for peace
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Lorraine Colon 01 December 2015

You get a standing ovation for this one, Claudine. How perceptive you are. Truth thrown into the faces of the offenders. You did a great job! And to answer your question..... no, I don't believe we will ever get there. The supply of greedy, evil people will never run out.... with more being born each day. All we can do is keep fighting it, and not let it get complete control.

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Claudine Riel 01 December 2015

Thank you so much for taking time to read my poem, and for the feedback. It means a lot. I guess I was frustrated the day I wrote this one. I wrote this in 2008, and I know, like you said, we'll never get there.

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Claudine Riel

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