Starting That Summer Romance Comments

This is very good, Delilah, very good indeed. I particularly like your metaphors - '...speaking in-out ocean talk' and '... jewels in my fist, //too heavy to carry away, too precious to leave unmeasured.' Your work has a maturity that impresses. Looking forward to lots more. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

''The time it takes, days of awkard silences and staring at a mouth you're learning to listen to.'' poetically lines are knitted all through to kite up the tone..wonderful romantic poem..10++