Monday, July 8, 2019

Starting School Comments

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My very first day at a place of learning
Five tears old my stomach was churning
What was my crime to deserve all this
Dad took leave with a smile and a kiss.
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Frederick Nellist
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Chinedu Dike 08 July 2019

Well articulated and elegantly brought forth in beautiful rhyme scheme with conviction. An insightful creation written from the heart. Thanks for sharing, Freddie.

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Frederick Nellist

Frederick Nellist

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