Sunday, January 18, 2009

Starter Comments

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The story begins not today
It neither occurred in the past
Nor it would ever start
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Dr Kamran Haider Bukhari
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Mehwih Umber 08 March 2009

Hello I have read a few poems of yours, they are nice and well written but the thing most of them lack is 'hope'. The reason is evident but the only thing that can change fate is 'prayer'. Pray with depth and with faith and you will get want. Regards

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Aijaz Asif 20 January 2009

a marvellous write kamran bhai and yes the etarters are like this but i'm not sure that am i the starter or my end is near? ? ? ? anyways it is a very beautiful write with good messages, an inspiring piece...thanks for sharing 10+++++++ and A++++ rgds asif

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Seema Aarella 19 January 2009

Beautiful write kamran, Exactly starters are like this.....never reachable to our imaginations, the silent blossomming of a night flower, in total secrecy, mysterious, untouched, but sought after with zeal, what else could take shape in the hollowness of mind, in the abyss of heart, in the depths of eyes.....it keeps me wondering! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 18 January 2009

Wow....amazing thoughts my friend.It could be somethin religious, divinity, heavenly love or anythin miricalous that grips mankind existence.Great piece bro.

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Indira Babbellapati 18 January 2009

waiting for the main course...! ! ! ! ! ! !

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