Thursday, September 11, 2008

Started With A Kiss Comments

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Started with a kiss
Ended with a tear
First one I shall miss
Last one I still fear
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Thomas Viruvelil 14 September 2008

Do not cry on lost love or lost opportunities More love more sunny days more opportunities are coming your way Think of tomorrow bright and hopeful Dont simply cry on yesterday

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June Feir-Cruz 11 September 2008

If I am understanding your poem correctly: things go awry when the demarcation of friendship is crossed. In a perfect world: it's better to be friends first if we're lucky and end up closer than that. Love your work. Keep going, keep writing and most of all keep LIVING. Best, June

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