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Should I honor thee with your pen,
or remind you of who you still are,
now that wisdom has opened the eyes
of men, and clothed them with self-same
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Nate Tulay
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Anna Montgomery 03 February 2023

I enjoyed it very much

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Meredith Briggs 09 December 2022

I love the meanings hidden behind some of your words. That's my favorite thing about poetry. You can say things in code that only people you target it to will get. even though sometimes it happens without you doing that: P

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Bri Edwards 23 April 2022

Nate, Ok, I plan to use this in a future 'Showcase' on P-H. Thanks. bri ;)

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Nate Tulay 23 April 2022

Thanks Bri, it means a lot to me and I really appreciate it!

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Bri Edwards 20 April 2022

This is quite interesting to read: 'should I scar you with our love, and remind you of all of the lives you cannot remember, now that heaven has kissed and showed me images of some of the things that exist beyond the physical plane? ' bri ;)

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Nate Tulay 20 April 2022

the poem is designed to poke the too logical and scientific mind to think beyond the physical plane of existence... and to search about schizophrenia and how it affects the mind... lol

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Bri Edwards 20 April 2022

This is the first line I can see on this poem's page. More trouble on P-H! ! : 'now that wisdom has opened the eyes'

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