Thursday, August 20, 2009

Start The Game (Cameo) Comments

Rating: 4.8

Checkmate
We laugh and undo
Concentration, we always do
But laughter
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lady grace
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Emancipation Planz 29 August 2009

lady grace... this played as if it should have been thrown for me... as the 'dice of discovery'... thanks for the lesson

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Obinna Eruchie 28 August 2009

A time for having fun for a happy moment. Wonderful!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 August 2009

Checkmate We laugh and undo Concentration, we always do But laughter We can’t avoid when we hav......... u can checkmate it as it is key to happiness and success. laughter is the medicine for keeping one healthy so laugh more....10 read mine join....

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Ying Escalona 23 August 2009

if time allows..i teach you...perde gana....or dama.....you enjoy it more.over a gallon of tuba :) or rather some challenging games like...bato-lata, syatong, tubig-tubig, buwan-buwan..

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 22 August 2009

can you explain? shan

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Ken E Hall 22 August 2009

Concentration yes it is a fun game a good cameo can't wait for my next humiliation game enjoyed the read regards

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Ravi A 21 August 2009

Checkmate, we laugh..... This should be our general view about life also. We should be able to see happiness beyond our tears. The poem can be read from this philosophical angle too. Good.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 21 August 2009

good happy moments!

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Eyan Desir 21 August 2009

Yeah....this is a nice poem well written

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Dr Kamran Haider 21 August 2009

liked it... brevity is the soul of the wit... every game has an end and u seem like beginning with the end... good one...

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Shashendra Amalshan 21 August 2009

Hey again a nice one, , .. this is very creative too.... Beautiful... I am never being good at short pieces, this is wonderful.. lovess shan

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I love this one Grace. So few words, but much laughter. This is the best medicine and so is your poem. 10 love Karin

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Carol Gall 21 August 2009

like this one lady 10

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Rajaram Ramachandran 21 August 2009

checkmates are part of life to see that one does not crashland anywhere.

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Noel Horlanda 21 August 2009

Hey, this is fun and great! I love chess yah know? Good that you have this cameo short and brief. Well done!

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Catrina Heart 21 August 2009

A game which enhances the mind is always great plus the pleasure of playing it with fun is much better........so nice of you also to acknowledge our great poet friend Carl harris for his patience in teaching you this cameo form....Loved it dear! ! ! 10

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Fay Slimm 20 August 2009

A friendship game is something of pleasure - - - and value - - a fine verse...10 from Fay

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C. P. Sharma 20 August 2009

Enjoy the game In good mindframe. CP

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nice your of the forms. it makes it breathless.........................

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