Wednesday, July 16, 2008

Stars (Synai) Comments

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The sky is full of beautiful stars,
all so gorgeous and unique,
as life is full of beautiful girls.
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Javier Falcon
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May Namoc 18 July 2008

i love this poem! soo powerful and passionate and umm, yeah all that cool jazz. you are an amazing writer. dont ever forget that.=)

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That last stanza is the strongest... very good in detail, im picturing a galaxy of stars, and one lost star waiting to be found and loved... very good write.. x3, millie

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Javier Falcon

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