Wednesday, November 15, 2017

Stars,Moon, And Dreams.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the stars blink and open their eyes. The
man in the moon, smiles, and says its time to
rise. Dusk is gone, and the children have come
out to make wishes on. That star, their star. So
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Rebecca Navarre
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Timber Koleden 30 May 2025

It reminds me of nights from my own childhood! Beautiful! Thank you for sharing this!

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Varsha M 16 July 2021

This is mesmerizing. You have psinted a beautiful metaphorical world where hopes find the top place. You showed how we make our life meaningful in small things like stars and moon and move in.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 July 2021

A magnificent poem with superb imagery!

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Rebecca Navarre 14 February 2018

Thank You! ! ! White Tiger, For Such A Beautifully Kind And Thoughtful Reply! ! ! ! ! I Look For To Visiting Your Poetry Page! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Rebecca Navarre 14 February 2018

Thank You! ! ! Netty, For Such A Beautifully Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Beautifully Speaks, Of Nature, , Life, With Such Beauty, That Touches The Reader Deep! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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White Tiger 09 February 2018

This is a very nice and imaginative write that left me staring up at the sky at night, seeing all that heavenly beauty. Thank you for sharing Rebecca. A 10+++

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Jeanette Telusma 22 November 2017

A beautiful poem about the open sky... Each line draws a picture in one's mind! ! ! ! - - As the stars blink and open their eyes.- - -

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