As the stars blink and open their eyes. The
man in the moon, smiles, and says its time to
rise. Dusk is gone, and the children have come
out to make wishes on. That star, their star. So
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This is mesmerizing. You have psinted a beautiful metaphorical world where hopes find the top place. You showed how we make our life meaningful in small things like stars and moon and move in.
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This is a very nice and imaginative write that left me staring up at the sky at night, seeing all that heavenly beauty. Thank you for sharing Rebecca. A 10+++
A beautiful poem about the open sky... Each line draws a picture in one's mind! ! ! ! - - As the stars blink and open their eyes.- - -
It reminds me of nights from my own childhood! Beautiful! Thank you for sharing this!